Review Details
Reviewer has chosen to be Anonymous
Overall Impression: Good
Suggested Decision: Accept
Technical Quality of the paper: Good
Presentation: Good
Reviewer`s confidence: Medium
Significance: Moderate significance
Background: Comprehensive
Novelty: Limited novelty
Data availability: All used and produced data (if any) are FAIR and openly available in established data repositories
Length of the manuscript: The length of this manuscript is about right
Summary of paper in a few sentences (summary of changes and improvements for
second round reviews):
The authors have worked well on addressing a few of my comments and for other comments, I have received their arguments. Now the paper has a Conclusion section and Limitations have been added as a separate section. I have a couple of comments in response to these changes which are being stated below.
Reasons to accept:
- The paper is written well.
- The dataset has been diligently collected and good scientific practices have been observed.
Reasons to reject:
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Nanopublication comments:
Further comments:
Below are a couple of comments that I want authors to address before the paper is being published:
- While the paper provides valuable socio-economic data, it may not align directly with the Data Science journal’s focus. Authors said in their response that "... Even if they [social scientists] study the society and are different from the fundamental science in a lot of ways, the social sciences are 'science' too",. I agree with this point surely but to be relevant to the Data Science journal, I will still like to see that authors motivate the relevance to Data Science audience. For instance, highlight the potential use of this data to be used for predictive analytics for urban planning or poverty reduction. Or maybe how the NGOs and other civil society rights organisations can use the data to highlight gaps in gender equality, health, and socio-economic inclusion in urban areas. Without such concrete suggestions, the real value of dataset cannot be understood.
- About "Limitations of the Study" section: I only find the third limitation (time and finances limitation) to be really a limitation of the study. The first two are actually challenges faced in the study. If authors consider first two also as limitations, I will ask them to illustrate how these two challenges limited or affected the results of the study and how those limitations were mitigated. Or if there are any future directions planned to address such challenges. I see that the subsection "The questionnaire" states some limitations about human and cultural bias and the strategies used to overcome those biases. It can be an idea to merge all the limitations here as a sub-section as it feels better for the reading flow.
- Authors have added the Conclusion section now so there is no abrupt ending to the paper now, thanks for that.
2 Comments
Response to the queries raised by the esteemed reviewers
Submitted by anushree nagpal on
Dear Victor de Boer, editors-in-chief and reviewers, We would like to thank you for the thoughtful comments regarding our manuscript entitled 'Situating Women in the Urban Slums: Socio economic dataset from the slums in Lucknow, India'
' (#863-1843). The following are the responses to the queries raised by the reviewers-
• The sentence of the first paragraph seems more fitting towards the end of the Introduction section
• This section is about the value of data really has nothing to do with methodology. In here one would expect to see survey methods etc. I think all of these points fit better within the remit of the Data section, or can be woven into the Introduction section.
• “For the selection of wards, initially, the slum colonies were put in descending order of their population size. Arithmetic mean of the whole distribution was then computed which led to its classification into two groups. The mean of each of the two groups further led to creation of four groups with lesser intervals.”
o I’m not sure how the two groups were created based in the mean. Was it one group within one standard deviation from the mean and the second group everything beyond this? A more information is needed,
• I was wondering if there was a specific reason for the data being collected at two different time windows, that i.e., March to May, and August to October? I think some statement should be made here, whether it be due to resource limitations, requirement for support from safai navaks, etc. Or a the very least a statement should be made with respect to changes in slum population across these two time windows so users of the data can understand fitness for their specific uses.
o “…followed by SC and ST communities” – What are SC and ST relating to here?
meta-review by editor
Submitted by Tobias Kuhn on
The reviewers agree that the dataset is potentially very useful and interesting and that most of the issues identified have been addressed adequately. There remain some small remarks regarding the positioning towards the Data Science community and the limitations section, which we ask you to address in the final version that will be published by the journal.
Victor de Boer (https://orcid.org/0000-0001-9079-039X)