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Overall Impression: Weak
Suggested Decision: Reject
Technical Quality of the paper: Weak
Presentation: Weak
Reviewer`s confidence: Medium
Significance: High significance
Background: Reasonable
Novelty: Lack of novelty
Data availability: All used and produced data (if any) are FAIR and openly available in established data repositories
Length of the manuscript: The length of this manuscript is about right
Summary of paper in a few sentences:
This paper has a twofold objective : the first one is to analyze the past dynamic of three climatic variables (temperature, cloud cover and precipitation). The authors show an increasing value in the temperature trend in the last 120 years. In a second part, the three climate variables are forecasted in the 80 next years (2020-2100). The authors show a predicted increased value in temperature of 2 °C, and slight changes in precipitation and cloud cover. To perform these predictions, the authors used a Seasonal ARIMA model.
Reasons to accept:
Paper with some interesting results. The method and model are well-known and already applied in climate change analysis/prediction. The novelty is the application to this specific region. It also adds a new argument to the increase of temperature in the next couple of decades and comfort the actual predictions made in other part of the world.
The results with temperatures (mean, minimum and maximum) are good, and the model shows a good fit and great prediction for the validation set.
Reasons to reject:
General reasons :
First, the novelty here is debatable. The only new thing is the application to this specific region. The model is widely used in the existing literature.
Then, as said before, results with temperatures are good. However, on Fig 16-18, we can spot a high seasonality. It seems that the model is predicting the same pattern and does not catch the little annual variation and trend. The analysis and prediction of the trends (as shown in Fig 2-6), monthly or split in season, seems to be a better option. Like this, the focus would be on the trend (the real interest of the study) and less on fitting the monthly seasonality, that we already know and assume.
For precipitation and cloud cover, the results are mixed. As the rainfall are extremely fluctuant, it is way harder to fit it with an (S)ARIMA model. However, as said in the literature review, the main problem with rainfall is heavy rains and drought. In the region, it already provoked catastrophes and might be one of the major issues caused by climate change in the next decades. The problem could then be adapted by focusing on the extreme events related to rainfall. For example, a study could be run counting the number of months/weeks exceeding a dangerous threshold. ARIMA model could fit and then forecast this metrics. Like this, we would be able to have a better idea of the extreme rainfall events coming with climate change.
More specific remarks :
Fig 1, page 2 : Good overall figure but maybe on the left part, print the overall shape of India for the readers to have a more overall idea of the localization of study zone.
Fig 2 to 5, page 7-8 : Combining the figure would let the reader comparing the four seasons’ trends with putting the point in transparency (alpha=0.3 for example). Same for the regression tables 1-3 and figure 6, combining them would make the presentation clearer, with subtitles.
Fig 7 and 8 : Scatter plot would be more appropriate than line. Regression line could be eventually added.
Model optimization : ACF and PACF are good to determine the ARIMA and SARIMA parameter. However, it may just be a starting point for the parameter tuning. It is not clear if you test other set of parameters with value around the ones extracted from ACF and PACF curves analyze. Maybe it would be a good idea to try with +/- 1 value on each parameter to see if it better the evaluation metric (AIC or BIC). For example, if the best MA value is 3 based on the ACF curve, try 2 and 4 to see if it gets a better AIC and try then with the new best value, and so on.
Nanopublication comments:
Further comments:
To conclude, this paper provides a new argument in the temperature change in the next couple of years of Kashmir Valley. However, some things should be changed (model tuning, metric used for optimization, the study around rainfall) to make it even stronger and a solid paper on the future issues we might face with climate change.
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Review the paper and comment.
Submitted by Malik Jawarneh on
Meta-Review by Editor
Submitted by Tobias Kuhn on
Below is a summary of the main issues raised by the reviewers:
While the paper presents some interesting results and adds to the current understanding of temperature increases in the coming decades, the issues highlighted above prevent us from accepting this submission. We appreciate your interest in our journal and hope that the feedback provided will be helpful for any future submissions.
Once again, we apologize for the delay in our decision, and we thank you for considering our journal for your work.
Thomas Chadefaux (https://orcid.org/0000-0002-8456-8124)